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::Neighboring Sky's::

Published: Apr 10, 2017

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Description

When i'm lonely I look up
when i'm sad I look down
when i'm happy I think about everyone
and when im just being little old me, I turn to the neighboring sky's and say, "Hi!"
constellations dance, and stars wave in the sky.
I like my neighbors :3
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so this style was really weird for me to draw in- I tried a kinda nitw/chibi kinda style, and I think it came out alright UvU
im actually kinda proud of this <33

hope y'all enjoy! art Buttercup1220

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SibireunHaski

Apr 10, 2017

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You did a good job here and I really like this. But I do see some things that could be fixed.

There's some strange line between the outline of the character and the coloring; I'm not sure what caused this, but it's distracting. A few places I saw that there was some coloring outside of the outline, mainly on the tail. Shading could use a little work as well, it's inconsistent in places and in areas the character looks flat.

But there are quite a few things I like about this piece.

The colors you chose for the character are calm and go well together, and the eyes are gorgeous. I love the pattern you chose for the dress. The lightning bugs are a nice touch as well; they really add a nice feeling to the drawing, I see them like the stars of nature.

Overall I think you did a pretty great job, you just need to improve on a few things. Keep it up!